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February 10, 2016 By Andrew Jack

I’m up all night to get stabby: Knives and knife fighting for writers

In fiction, especially genre fiction, knives are often seen as a hassle. An inconvenient sign that the bad guy is really bad. The protagonists are usually able to disarm/shoot/magic away the knifer before things get too bad. The protagonists get some kudos for beating a weapon wielding assailant and the bad guys get even less sympathy because they had a blade.

Real life doesn’t work this way.

This isn't a joke, this is a nightmare...actually to be fair the hood is pretty funny. The knife? NOT SO MUCH.

This isn’t a joke, this is a nightmare…actually to be fair the hood is pretty funny. The knife? NOT SO MUCH.

In real life knives are terrifying, life destroying weapons. At very close range they’re a match for a gun, and even experienced fighters can be undone by an amateur wielding a knife, let alone an expert. I think it’s important that we as writers impart a little consequence to the violence we put on the page. A great fight scene should be fun, but if the story you’re writing has life or death stakes then a knife should be seen as a real threat with real consequences. Even characters with super powers or high level martial arts should be wary of taking on a blade at close range, and if the person wielding it has any clue whatsoever about how to fight with a knife, then they should get cut or stabbed unless there’s a very good reason for them not to.

Obviously world destroyer level heroes and villains are exempt from this, but any character that’s still more or less mortal should be very nervous about the flash of a blade.

Speaking of which, in my experience as a bouncer, if someone showed you a knife they were doing so to intimidate you. If someone really wanted to stab someone else you wouldn’t know until someone else was bleeding. If a knifer is looking to kill your protagonists then the attack should come out of nowhere, more an assassination attempt than a mugging, rather than flashing the blade first…after all, why should the bad guys give your character a chance?

Another thing to bear in mind is very few knife attacks are traditional one shot stabs or slashes. The most common attack is called the sewing machine and it’s just about impossible to stop unless you are very good and very lucky. The assailant just grabs the back of your shirt/head and repeatedly stabs up into your abdomen. Vicious, repeated stabs.

Even if you can disable the knifer, chances are you (and by you I mean your protagonist, I really hope you don’t get stabbed) are going to be injured, maybe badly. This can add a great wrinkle where you can show your character’s badassery (they took out a knife wielding assailant!) and the consequences of violence (and they got repeatedly stabbed and now need medical attention).

 

 

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  1. Bill D says

    February 10, 2016 at 7:29 am

    Another thing to bear in mind is that if the fight should end up being a more traditional one, with both people standing rather than the ambush attack, the experienced knife user won’t go for the body unless the chance is just too good to pass up. A slash across an arm will bleed, and if they bleed long enough the target is done. A body doesn’t care where the blood is lost from, only that it’s missing. Arms flailing around will bleed a lot.

    There are also a few “sweet spots” on the arms that can cause loss of consciousness in under a minute. Reaching out to grab a knife may be just what the guy with the blade is hoping the protag will do.

    • Andrew Jack says

      February 19, 2016 at 2:40 am

      A very good point! When I was first training with knives we were taught to keep the backs of our hands to our opponents as much as we could because of the risk of getting a cut across the wrist or through the arteries in the inner arm.

  2. Jes says

    February 12, 2016 at 3:12 pm

    “if someone showed you a knife they were doing so to intimidate you. If someone really wanted to stab someone else you wouldn’t know until someone else was bleeding.”

    True words!

  3. David says

    July 21, 2016 at 4:32 pm

    You got it! In real life knives are terrifying, life destroying weapons. And so no ones going to play it around.

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